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6/26/2019

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Below is an excerpt from Rhylee's Big Write (he was focusing on using simile and metaphor). I think you will agree, he has done a brilliant job!

"It would be paradise… As the giant beast glided into the dark gloomy cave the mountain started rumbling like an old car getting switched on for the first time in 30 years. Soon the beast would be parents with their egg on a pillow like a pile of leaves, but wait what was that ‘crack’ ‘crack’
“BURST” the baby dragon popped out of its shell, its molten lava-like eyes gleaming at its parents
And it razor sharp teeth clenching hard with anger,
It waddled like a penguin, the Baby Beast its tiny little feet hobbling across the hard cobblestone and rubble…"

Well done Rhylee!
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